She sits in the corner and cries

by Abandoned Angel   Jul 9, 2011


She sits alone,
no friends,
no voice or shy?

If one person says hi,
if one person is kind,
she will smile,
she will laugh,
she will find her voice.

Life is cruel,
She stops going school,
at the age of six she wants to end it all,
she's lost it all.

no one notices her beauty,
no one notices her talent,
a wonderful writer,
a beautiful young girl,
who sit's in the corner and cries.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This is incredibly sad. But lovely, nonetheless. I love this. It feels like the infantile sadness that still remains in all of us.

    One small note, the title should be 'cries' and not 'cry's'.

    Other than that, this is brilliantly worded.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I really enjyoed reading this poem, it is soooo SAD, you worded what you wanted to say sooo nicely and your heart beats in each and every word, you have a lot of talent for expressing feelings on paper

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Out of nothing, special bones rise. From tears of agony, gems rise. Against all odds, victory abounds. As long as the heart beats, God cares. Tame the Past, and name your Future. Until you give up, you can win..

  • 13 years ago

    by ogbuagu

    Nice poem!! amazing write

  • 13 years ago

    by catherin

    I am touched ..i really loved it.Your emotions are perfectly penned...

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