Dont give up hope very well worded poem interesting theme excellent at the emotions of the words

I am touched ..i really loved it.Your emotions are perfectly penned...

Nice poem!! amazing write

Out of nothing, special bones rise. From tears of agony, gems rise. Against all odds, victory abounds. As long as the heart beats, God cares. Tame the Past, and name your Future. Until you give up, you can win..

I really enjyoed reading this poem, it is soooo SAD, you worded what you wanted to say sooo nicely and your heart beats in each and every word, you have a lot of talent for expressing feelings on paper

This is incredibly sad. But lovely, nonetheless. I love this. It feels like the infantile sadness that still remains in all of us.

One small note, the title should be 'cries' and not 'cry's'.

Other than that, this is brilliantly worded.