A very sad poem indeed. Sometimes we do cast aside everything that we think we know and are comfortable with in anger trying to search for our true self. The answer is always a combination of things hiding in our core, unanswered.
a beautiful painstaking write. Remember when all else is gone, hope is left.

WOW, this is amazing, and I know that you KNOW, how much I can relate to this.
No not only do I relate, but I can take your emotions into my own side, and understand whatever I want in regard of how I m feeling and what am goin through!

The way you placed the words, made it way easy to be read, and made the poem flows well, and ends before u notice, that u wanna just reread and feel every word again.

Unselfish, u call it, and i feel it as weak..most of us let others down nd push ppl away cause we are scared of being hurtt (perhaps_) and by that we may end up hurting others and being alone..which indeed may be selfish!

I Love this, a LOT! and the title is very inspiring!
Well done!!!
sure i will take this 2 the contest's page lol next week

5/5

You're really an awesome writer :)

I loved this breathless journey of poetic glory from the very first letter to the bomb word 'exiled'

It's flawless :D

U contain the soul of a poet so deep awesome