OMG, you wrote this with such a great level of poetic expressions.
Great imagination, I am left speechless with ur new piece,,and I hope it's cause of me haha.. no seriously am so into such poems, and u had some striking lines!

like

There are only a few
who still hold onto their wings,

^ have no idea how that touched me, it's a thought provoking line!

and here...i can take it my own way :

with wisdom...
not pitching their faith
to feel the fall.

^
makes me feel of how i am exactly!!
this is just, i dnu wat 2 say, i think you word ur thoughts in a professional way!

*of distraught chaos-
a bundled up heart.

^
makes me think of my ownself, nd how jumbled I am, and how bottled I feel!
this is art.

And your closing verse left a huge impact, indeed there is more than everything, that the word loss itself, and gain it self,,
and definitely more than a last sign..

your most sad words, gives me hope..
due to its wisdom! thanks

5/5

I see the appocolyps in this poem, or a war just like it, and to get through these tough times, we need each other to get by, as always, love your poems, a 5/5 indeed. and you know the deal, keep writting, and I'll keep reading.

From the PoetryKnight