Oh!tis so bad!

by The Po whet   Jul 10, 2011


When you can't utter the words,
yet your intentions are seen by your deeds,
oh!tis so bad!
when you swear you got the courage,
yet when near you are tongue-tied and feeble as a leaf in stormy weather,
oh!tis so bad!

when deep within you have all the hope,
but proceeding the action on the way you lose hope,
oh!tis so bad!
when you can't bear it much longer,
but the audacity to approach is lacking,
oh! tis so bad!

when you wait for the chance,
yet like dew it dries and vanishes by the noon's scorching sun,
oh!tis so bad!
when you can't bear the lose,
yet you can't help the sight of being turned down and left with a wounded heart,
oh!tis so bad!

when you're giving it so heartly,
yet your reward is so minute,
oh!tis so bad!
when you cling on to the illusion,
yet in real life you're just in your world of utopia,
oh!tis so bad!

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I couldn't agree more... But surely this piece is good... Loved it

    • 7 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Thanks again for your comment on this piece from my archives ( lol) ,I so much appreciate .

  • 13 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I liked this... I could feel how hopelessness overcomes a person at times. and how that feeling makes you feel like you can't do what you want, but you really can.

    "when you wait for the chance,
    yet like dew it dries and vanishes by the noon's scorching sun"
    ^ This line is my favourite! It just says it all.

    I don't like the repetition of the title though... it sounds jazz to me and I don't like jazz.. Though it might sound better to others<<< it's a personal thing.

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