Lost faith

by My tiny voice   Jul 10, 2011


The truth is I was in love with love,
and you killed it.
Took away my trust
and replaced it with fear.
The lies you told,
did more damage than you could ever know.
You have left me broken,
lost and dead inside.
My faith is shattered,
my belief is torn.

Blood leaks
from the murdered emotions.
Another may drift,
but the walls will always remain.
Playing each day safe
and never letting go.
To lose control once,
would i be gone forever?
My heart aches,
my body trembles.
One touch, could be the end.

Is the future just more pain,
will my hope always be lost.
The darkness surrounds me,
but one day will the light return.
I pray and i wish,
to learn to love again.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    The structure you chose for this poem makes the message behind it really dramatic, which it actually is. The flow isn't always continious but that is alright. This is really emotional and it touched me to an extrend you can't imagine. Describings the feelings as detailed as you did gives the reader the possibility to follow the speakers situation better. All in all i think this a good poem, you should try rhyming it the next time ;)