Days like this

Okay, first of all make up your mind. I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just being matter-of-fact. In every sentence you wrote, you are contradicting the last sentence. It may be lacking imagery, it may be lacking story. But, this is the way I wrote my poem. I wrote what I was feeling. You don't have to remember it, that's fine. All that matters to me is that I put my thoughts down on paper and it makes me feel good. And that is why I like to write. I do not write to impress others, I only write to express how I am feeling and maybe have someone read it and realize that they are not alone in how they are feeling.

I really like how you wrote this piece.
It does have emotion though it could use a little more. There is a nice flow though it does get rough in some places. Your word choice was well thought out. Imagery and story are both lacking, so is the creativity of the piece. I can't tell you how many poems I have read like this one, but nothing about this makes me want to remember it. I mean it is a lovely write, don't get me wrong, it's just it needs something. The beginning was weak and the end was just kinda there,but neither did anything for the piece really.