I really like how you wrote this piece.
It does have emotion though it could use a little more. There is a nice flow though it does get rough in some places. Your word choice was well thought out. Imagery and story are both lacking, so is the creativity of the piece. I can't tell you how many poems I have read like this one, but nothing about this makes me want to remember it. I mean it is a lovely write, don't get me wrong, it's just it needs something. The beginning was weak and the end was just kinda there,but neither did anything for the piece really.

Okay, first of all make up your mind. I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just being matter-of-fact. In every sentence you wrote, you are contradicting the last sentence. It may be lacking imagery, it may be lacking story. But, this is the way I wrote my poem. I wrote what I was feeling. You don't have to remember it, that's fine. All that matters to me is that I put my thoughts down on paper and it makes me feel good. And that is why I like to write. I do not write to impress others, I only write to express how I am feeling and maybe have someone read it and realize that they are not alone in how they are feeling.