MY PEN GENTLY WEEPS

This one is a beautyyyyy :D ... I loved it man.

The idea is very original, the attractive title influenced by the Beatles in a very non cliche way.. Nice job Buddy :))

However, the 3rd line, i suppose it should have been 'All the songs' as opposed to 'every songs' more linguistically appropriate.

A kool one there mate

It's okay...

Ust realised u wrote it to long ago i cant nominate it ... wish i read it sooner soz dude

This is unbelievable ... i really loved this piece how true what would the world be like where people couldnt share there emotions people use poerty to show there feelings they cant bare to say ... i also love the fact you stated how music is poerty but with melody its so true ... music and poerty are one .... and the ending where u cant bare the pen weep i kind of though of the pen wanting to get out his feelings to ... might just be my imagantion ... anyway im nominating this one and in my favs i really did love this stunning write

Now this is more a poem I like, it got my attention from the title 5/5