Comments : MY PEN GENTLY WEEPS

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Wow such a very deep and reflective thought...
    I agree with you about the song... I actually started song writing before poetry and its very true! I cant imagine a world without poetry.. Poetry is a way to express yourself and to pour out what is hidden within the depths of your soul so it would be lifeless without a world of poetry. I really enjoyed reading this!
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    Now this is more a poem I like, it got my attention from the title 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is unbelievable ... i really loved this piece how true what would the world be like where people couldnt share there emotions people use poerty to show there feelings they cant bare to say ... i also love the fact you stated how music is poerty but with melody its so true ... music and poerty are one .... and the ending where u cant bare the pen weep i kind of though of the pen wanting to get out his feelings to ... might just be my imagantion ... anyway im nominating this one and in my favs i really did love this stunning write

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Ust realised u wrote it to long ago i cant nominate it ... wish i read it sooner soz dude

  • 13 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    It's okay...

  • 13 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    This one is a beautyyyyy :D ... I loved it man.

    The idea is very original, the attractive title influenced by the Beatles in a very non cliche way.. Nice job Buddy :))

    However, the 3rd line, i suppose it should have been 'All the songs' as opposed to 'every songs' more linguistically appropriate.

    A kool one there mate