This was cool of how you tried to describe sounds essence. really good, a little short for my tastes but all in all good

"made from thought
and shrinking really fast.
To never completely disappear,
But might as well be gone."

I found this to be a really powerful piece though it is short. Really shows great talent here.

I love how you likened sound to a memory/thought (correct me if im wrong). So clear in one second, then fades away the next, perhaps to nothingness. Great piece. I never thought I'd read those words (omega, alpha) i studied in chemistry in a poem lol.. Really enjoyed this. Def 5/5 :)

-X

This piece is really thought provoking. It had me asking myself many questions and wondering stuff about sound.

The sound, yeah, sound really does have an effect in our lives. When I was reading this piece, the "think twice before you speak" phrase came to my mind, because just like sound whatever we say can seem to disappeared into nothingness but it remains in someone's heart..

Here is how you could compress it.

SOUND

Said to move in only waves,
A particle, you ask?

A particle made from thought
and shrinking fast.

It might as well be gone.
it fades into a nothingness

Alpha is our grandeur
Omega will be our home!

Why compress it though? Is there a need for it to be shorter? It's all ready a short poem, plus this compressed version not only makes less sence, bu you lost its rhyme and rhythm.

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