Comments : The Cause

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    No one in my lifetime has ever crossed science with religion. great poem, im learning alot from your works. good read, keep em coming

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    It is rather lengthy, but I enjoyed reading this. Your poems are somehow connected to one another, revolving around the same 'idea', yet they don't leave the reader uninterested. Great job on that. The rhymes are nice, though I'm not too crazy about them. The capitalization added emphasis, I like that. Punctuation was good. Overall, it's a great read. You know how to leave your signature in your piece. Will be reading more :)
    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I find that you must really like sound. Loved your words and your theme of this piece. I have also discovered that you are really good with these scientific words, so creative you are.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I think this one summarizes and explains everything in this poem.

    "He is Alpha - Sound "as matter"...light
    He is Omega - Sound "The Cause"
    One in the same, quite literally,
    "BOTH" positive existing laws!: