If we did not say goodbye

This is short, but the point still gets across wonderfully.I love how there is emotion, story, tone, and voice all in one piece.

If we did not say goodbye
^^ This is a nice start, and it pulled me in.

Do not ask how sad eye bloodied
^^ At first this did not fit, but in the end it made sense and felt appropriate.

Do not ask for any reasons the bird is gone
^^ This throws the flow off, but is my favorite line in the piece.

My heart still live by hope alone
^^ Grammar correction: live should be lives

We Hugs our tears in the dark
Hugs should be hug or hugged. This line in emotion as well as a wonderful description.

I never think we will end like this
this end the top of the tragedy
^^ Perfect ending.

great piece. 4/5 because it could be stronger, the flow could be smoother, and the grammar mistakes, add up.

This is amazing :)