This is amazing :)

This is short, but the point still gets across wonderfully.I love how there is emotion, story, tone, and voice all in one piece.

If we did not say goodbye
^^ This is a nice start, and it pulled me in.

Do not ask how sad eye bloodied
^^ At first this did not fit, but in the end it made sense and felt appropriate.

Do not ask for any reasons the bird is gone
^^ This throws the flow off, but is my favorite line in the piece.

My heart still live by hope alone
^^ Grammar correction: live should be lives

We Hugs our tears in the dark
Hugs should be hug or hugged. This line in emotion as well as a wonderful description.

I never think we will end like this
this end the top of the tragedy
^^ Perfect ending.

great piece. 4/5 because it could be stronger, the flow could be smoother, and the grammar mistakes, add up.