by Liliana
Really Good, love the way you put the story ant the words together, everything makes sense 5/5 |
by Jenni
I never knew my father[,] I never knew my mother |
by Decayed
Wow.. It's like a psycho-thriller movie! |
by Heather
If superman wrote poetry...it would be JUST like this :) 5/5 |
It's a bird It's a plane IT"S Tony :-) |
by empty inside
I love this =D |
by Half Husband Half father
Clean, simple n rhythmic... Awesme... |
by Half Husband Half father
Clean, simple n rhythmic... Awesme... |
by FEMI AKANBI
Awesome. I've to commend the way u narrated d superman story in short simple story. |
This is very unique, I like it a lot. :) |
by Lemon
You have some really good rhymes in here. I like how the reader is kept guessing until the final stanza where you give subtle clues to let the reader know who the narrator is. You conveyed the difficulty of living a dual life here, and the frustration that it causes (or at least I presume it causes, I don't live a double life *shifty eyes*). 5/5 :) |
by Marcy Lewis
I love reading the poems where the man is the one with the insecurity, and he wishes he could disclose the fact to someone that he's not as strong as he appears. His past does upset him. His thoughts aren't always of brute strength and hope and protection. |