The message of this poem is really powerful and I think that it has an unbelievable depth. I really like the imagery you set and I'm sure everybody who has once been broken hearted or even let down can relate to this.

As humans we try to avoid getting hurt again that's why we build walls as mentioned in your poem. Yet new people come into our life and prove that they are trustworthy which makes the wall crack.

Keep up the good work! :)

Wow! I agree with the above as well as must add it is a fantastic job!