Comments : Heat of Ice

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, real story man. That's crazy. I'm sorry that this happened but it is a fabulous job,

  • 13 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Excellent! This was the best of yours Ive read so far :) it still needed a lil work but very nicely written! This poem also expresses how I felt after Michael did what he did! Idk if you knew that but, now you do. Excellent keep up this style <3