by My tiny voice Jul 11, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I am bound by this hold you have on me, |
by Jenni
The title you chose does not tell too much about what the reader has to expect. I think it fits and gets people curious. I also liked your choice of words in this poem and the way you used them. Directing the poem to a specific person gives the reader the possibility to follow your thoughts and understand your emotions for that person. This poem is filled with a lot of passion and I enjoyed reading it :) |