This is my ever-first poem, and it relates to me.

It's super short but says so much.
great job, keep writin. :)

This is really good, and it pulls you in and slowly lets you out. Nice job

Great job i love it. ''but their is no where she can move'' 'their' is spelled 'there' in this instant but other then that great job and keep writing

Sorry for the error, and thanks for the support!

Yeah.. that's how it is. Change what you can and accept what you can't change. It's hard but it's worth giving it an attempt.. :)