A good type of friendship poetry.. and the unique line before every stanza.. 'once upon a time" brought me in past. when i had such a nice friends in my life. i really liked your poetry...

the other thing the rhyme speaks good... that gives the reader a flow..

your poem is so simple and nice flowing. anyone can enjoy it.. great work sir :)

I really like this poem. i loved how you threw poems and quotes in there. I havent ever seen that in a poem here before :) My favorite line was:
When the world was pure I dreamed you were mine
this thought is so innocent and hopeful i loved it.

btw nightmares is one word:
Night mares will haunt me through the night

5/5