Happiness is a funny thing, but to be a ghost of one that was happy is such a sad thing in itself. This piece has nothing but pure wonderful emotion. Just because someone clasifies you as a freak doesn't mean you are one, it doesn't mean you are alone, and they may think you are the next victim; but if you really wanted to you could show them that they are the freaks because they don't know who they are but you do.

Okay on to the piece. The beginning really does pull you in and want to read the end. It is so strong, the emotion is so clear, and it oozes out of the entire piece. There is a magnificent flow, and a beautiful word choice. I love this, I can relate to it, I gave it a 5/5. To me this piece is absolutely perfect.

Lolz,this iz awesome_thé flow nd the story u told,amazing ! I mean it really touched my heart ! keep Writing !