Comments : That Moment...

  • 13 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    What a lovely and a dreamy imagery :)
    //Like a firework exploding, somewhere way up high;
    like the glittering stars romancing in the midnight sky.
    // the feeling is so beautifully described

    loved reading.

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Another Nice Write!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Another super poem, Olwin - a true treasure.
    The imagery in the second stanza is nothing short of beautiful and the rhyme is - as ever - wonderfully pleasing.
    All the very best and keep writing,
    Ben