by Saerelune
Nonchalant title yet a poem packed with emotion. As always your poetry leaves me speechless. I admire the way you're able to focus on such a small thing but add complexity to it with simple diction ... I could very well "breathe along" with you in this poem, your tone has always been a natural one that pulls the reader with you. I was especially fond of the fourth stanza, it had something artistic and personal to them. I felt as if the ink on your fingertips represented a connection between your soul and your art. Nicely done. |