That is amazing what emotion i could see the girl ready to end it all stunning piece , noone should ever have to feel like this the little thing we do just notice them talk to them tell them theres somthing worth living for ... we may save a liife x

Thank you :)

I have to agree with Tony the emotions ran rampant and gave the reader a sense of urgency to reach out.

This poem I just... I can't... I love it.