Wow, this is insane. But really good. Fantastic job.

You definately have grown with your poetry. But still I see somethings that you could improve on: 1: better use of diction(words) try using different words that mean close to the same thing. 2: your flow has improved but is still lacking try using words that flow better together and more punctuation. 3: always read your poem over and over until you are 100% satisfyed with what you have written there is no such thing as a perfect poem and only you can decide if its complete 4: DO NOT DOUBT YOURSELF you are a talented writer and dont let anyone EVER tell you differently! 5: Never force your poetry let it all come naturally if you for some reason cannot finish a poem dont force an ending let it sit awhile or try rewriting it that always works for me <3

Sad poem but a good one. The wording was simple but good and it flowed nicely.

5/5