I like it, so full of hate but very meaningful, theres is a time in our life that we all feel this way, with no exceptions we have good fellings just as much as we have bad ones. its part of the human being. good job

How to erase you from my memory cards and you're like the inscription on my grave...revenge

I really thought this poem was captivating because of the feelings you were expressing. I wanted to continue reading though it is filled with so much hate. I was able to imagine how the speaker felt because of the agony and hatred and I have to admit that if this was directed to me I'd feel a bit scared :P Well done though. :)

All i can feel is hatred and seek for revenge