Hey there!
I remember you asked me for m opinions about your writes, right? and here I am givin them! :)
and in my opinion, this piece is something worth a nomination and is going to be nominated the next week, so everyone can read it! :)
Do you remember the day
That everyone was
Dead or dumb?
That cat whose ninth life
lived out on tilt
^^^
that is sooo well-expressed and I so love it.
a very nice opening, though the poem was short but it made me feel inspired. :)
there are some metaphors that I didn't really understand, I will PM you asking 'bout them...;)
five and a nomination!
13 years ago
by Tara Kay
^Agreed :)
The only thing I will add is to remove the capital letters at the beginning of the lines. They are not needed and really do not fit into the easy eyes.