Lost orphen

by Broken Angel   Jul 20, 2011


An orphan without a home,
been with different families
but she still felt alone.
Where she will end up is still unknown.

Another new mom and dad.
Taken of everything she once had.
Her parents died when she was young,
but she still remembers the lullaby her mom once sung.

She has been beaten and abused,
she has been cheated and badly used.
No where else to go.
Living with people she doesn't know.

Hurting inside and out.
New parents have no clue what its about.
Every night she cries herself to sleep
family is listening to her weep.

She told them one day she had enough
but her family called it as a silly bluff.
They found out it wasn't a lie
and now they're wondering why she had to die.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Ohhh wow this poem touched me so bad
    It was sooo sad yet so true

    I loved everything bout it
    Your amazing at poetry...Hun never stop writing this was abouslty beautiful so beautiful it got me teared up(:

    1000/1000 from me darl....wow!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Mandrake13

    This poems grate it one of my favorites it was sad and i loved the way you expressed everything.
    100% pure talent 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    Quick piece of advice... your title should be spelled "orphan", not "orphen". :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    An awesome and Excellent piece of writing.. English is not my mother language but how easy it was for me to read all the poem... such a simple words and a nice piece of flow. i must say here this poem makes me feel so sad. because the way it is. such a sad poem..

    the line makes me feel so sad is the last line of this poem

    "and now they're wondering why she had to die"

    they are wondering but its so late. They did not care for her and she died.
    this poem meet the true reality of this world. well done my friend. i don't know who are you. but you are just brilliant. 5/5 + nominated

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    One of the best ive read in month the emotion the reality that people have to deal with im so glad u wrote this i write about stuff like this but its one i havnt done and now theres no point this was so perfect stunning piece ... you remind me so much of my stuff honestly this was awesome 5/5

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