by Jenni Jul 21, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Hey there dear, are you okay? |
by Tara Kay
Jenni, It's nice to know that you are a good friend, I know why you wanted me to read this and I thank you, |
by BlueJay
Wow!! This is amazing!! It is sweet and reassuring for someone to hear. Magnificent job!! |
by rachael
I concur with above comments - minor adjustments are possible, but not critical. I think you will find that many of your own favorites with me the pieces that experience the most experimentation/tweaking over time. I in beautifully written, touchingly sweet, and pleasantly simple. Well done! |
by Jon914
This is nice |
I thought this was an awesome message to someone that needs help. I won't try to make suggestions or pick apart any of it, I can tell it's from the heart |