Paradise

by Chelsey   Jul 22, 2011


Before I met you,
my imagination was so appealing
I envisioned shallow shores
that met at the feet of an island
Waves that swallowed sand,
palm trees fanning over sea,
the sunset radiating miles long.

Paradise- a place of bliss,
a place of delight and peace
All of which I find in your arms
when my head is on your chest,
and I can hear your heart beat
echoing in my eardrum

You are my paradise,
my place of escape, tranquility
Beauty is in the pattern of your eyes
that no ocean can compare to
Your kiss so moving, breathtaking
that no sunset can compete with

A mesmerizing state of adoration
I've fallen in love with paradise,
I've fallen in love with you

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  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    What imagery you have in your work. I can say it's breathtaking, tenderness at it's best

    Connie

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This was a beautiful write. I loved the opening stanza and the rest of poem just flowed really well. Eveything in this poem was really well connected.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by AngelDust

    Wow, you did a really good job here sweets. It's very well written and the wording you used is beautiful. Great use of imaginary and metophores, It really lives up to its title!! Brilliant write.

    Danika
    xxoxoxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Mmm babygurl..
    What a beautiful heartfelt piece..
    Though you used "paradise' quite many times,
    I think I worked well here.
    The poem is so sincere and lovely.
    And the ending was without a doubt a favorite part :)
    Its been a while since you've written a love poem..
    This is a nice come back :)!
    It really Reflects how happy you are with the relationship!
    So nice !!
    See! Love comes when we least expect it!

    Mwaaaaa.

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