Mmm babygurl..
What a beautiful heartfelt piece..
Though you used "paradise' quite many times,
I think I worked well here.
The poem is so sincere and lovely.
And the ending was without a doubt a favorite part :)
Its been a while since you've written a love poem..
This is a nice come back :)!
It really Reflects how happy you are with the relationship!
So nice !!
See! Love comes when we least expect it!

Mwaaaaa.

Wow, you did a really good job here sweets. It's very well written and the wording you used is beautiful. Great use of imaginary and metophores, It really lives up to its title!! Brilliant write.

Danika
xxoxoxx

This was a beautiful write. I loved the opening stanza and the rest of poem just flowed really well. Eveything in this poem was really well connected.

5/5

What imagery you have in your work. I can say it's breathtaking, tenderness at it's best

Connie