Heaven....

by Cassie   Jul 22, 2011


* once again, night time thougts, hope you like it :) *

Mommy ?
Can I talk to you for a second ?
I know its alot to ask but may I ?
I know you probably don't care but,
I was wondering if you want to talk today.

Daddy ?
Can I ask you something ?
I know you wont answer but,
Can you please come back ?
I'm all alone in the world...

Brother ?
Are you still here ?
Or are you with mommy and daddy ?
Can you tell me what heavens like ?
I bet its pretty.

"Dear God,
I know its alot to ask, but can you keep them safe for me ? And tell them how much i love them? Tell them they need to come home soon, they've been gone for so long, and I looked over the map many times, I can't find heaven.... Tell them that im well, and okay. Tell them i've been a good girl. Even though I cry alot, because I miss them, I love you mommy, daddy, and Brother, goodnight,.. Amen"

* dosn't rhyme at all i know, but they dont alway need to, and if anyone wonders. This is a letter i wrote when I was 5 and I found it in my old stuff today..... *

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sora

    Absolutely beautiful. there's no nee to have it rhyme dear, it's coming form your heart that's what matters. i also have many poems that do not rhyme. so you are doing very well! keep up the good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by HomoMegan

    I got all choaked up when i read this, its sad but very good. 5/5 from me :)