by cedric Jul 22, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
You can treat me like dirt, |
by BlueJay
Wow, this is amazing. Good job including emotion and flow. There is a really cool flow, that helps add your voice to the piece. The word choice really helps the meaning stand out clear. Awesome piece. |
by Mandrake13
You took it right out of my soul good job couldnt have done it better myself |
by Georgia
Really good :) |
by Gone
Aw that was a really nice poem, you really put your feelings into it, that's what really brought it alive. Great work! :) |
by cedric
Thanks! :) |