Very sad, but so nice and amazing. The feelings are so real and sincere. Nice come back Hassan :)

Hassan, the third stanza was really heartfelt:) I will leave a long comment later on, I just wanted you to know that I loved it!

I have no complaints on this well written poem which reflects well that our joy is often drawn from the same well that hol.ds our sorrow

- do not capitalize the first letter in each line.
- some commas aren't needed, like:

"She never noticed what was in my eyes,
Only wanted to say me bundle of goodbyes."

^^^
before "my eyes"

- I have a minor suggestion, here:

Making smiles and concentrating on someone,
She knew very well how to make that fun.
^^^
I would say:
"Making smiles, concentrating on someone,
who knew very well how to make that fun"

Things not happened as I wanted to see,
Like always she made sadness for me.
^^^

I would say:
"as I wanted it to be"
:)
:)

but this was very heartfelt! :) fivvve

I love the feeling of sweet melancholy that this write invokes. The English may not be perfect, but the emotion is! Well done.

A few minor mistakes but an awesome write. You pulled the reader into your emotional state with words of sadness.
Connie

Wow. Everything has already been said. Great job.

I love this poem:) really great 5/5:)

Good piece...very well-written", keep writing:=)