My Love Broken

by Damien   Jul 24, 2011


How dare she
Have the audacity
To choose over me
Choose to avoid me
How could this be

I admit, she is beautiful
Her personality; wonderful
Days of beauty; plentiful
She could have owned my heart
Stuck on it; tentacles

But now I see
Me and her are just a fantasy
Her and I are not meant to be
For only to meet
For only to be friendly

For her did I fight
I tried hard; despite
She still is not mine
Yes it hurts; bite
My heart remains non bright

I am heart broken
My honey words are not spoken
My weeping side has awaken
For I try no longer
My love broken

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  • 8 years ago

    by Vi

    Wow the years go by fast. If you could rewrite this poem would you still feel the same?

  • 13 years ago

    by v

    Love bites doesnt it! I feel your pain. Or the pain of others we know.

  • 13 years ago

    by v

    Wow! just beautiful! I know very well pain of unrequieted love. I may be mistaken, but it also sounds like your love went unspoken. Speak,speak, let it be known.

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Feel your pain</3

    How hard you tried to make it work, when in the end it never did.
    Loved this.
    It flowed perfectly & you could feel the pain as you wrote it.

    5/5

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