Feel your pain</3

How hard you tried to make it work, when in the end it never did.
Loved this.
It flowed perfectly & you could feel the pain as you wrote it.

5/5

Wow! just beautiful! I know very well pain of unrequieted love. I may be mistaken, but it also sounds like your love went unspoken. Speak,speak, let it be known.

Love bites doesnt it! I feel your pain. Or the pain of others we know.

Wow the years go by fast. If you could rewrite this poem would you still feel the same?