I enjoyed this poem a lot. I like the raw emotions you portrayed through describing the fragile book of life, and I loved the imagery and your word choice. I liked the beginning of the poem the most, though I do enjoy happy endings :) |
Wow, this poem you got here, this is beautiful. the rhymes, every word, the beginning, middle, the end, filled with emotions, wow. All in all this is beautiful. amazing Connie, amazing. :D |
by Jackie
What a lovely poem, very well written. 5/5 |
by Faithless
I love how your opening stanza, it just give the readers the mental image of an old book that been taken off, a dusty shelf. The content in the book makes you reminisce the time when you pen down your thoughts; thinking how pure your emotions we back then. Anyway it certainly was delightful to read and you added a great flow to it by writing a rhyme poetry. The ending was just lovely of how love is infinite, just like the circle. |
by The Po whet
I can say you took your time in creating this wonderful piece,it's amazing,luv your work. |
by Jon914
First 2 paragraphs spoke to me the most |
Very beautiful. Portrayal of life's moments as a book of life moments of friendship and love. |
by average thoughts
I just loved every single stanza..of this poem ..excellent..again |
by Exostosis
Such a mature piece. Looking at life like pages of a book. Life is just as fragile. Beautiful. |
by Tara Kay
Connie, I cannot believe I never read this before. |