As the ocean waxes and wanes
And as the sky turns dark again
And as the sun turns to moon
And as the stars cry out to you
You hear it in the air so deep
You hear it in the song to sleep
That everlasting wanting charm
To relax and give you're self-up
To the shadows that hide in your eyes
To the everlasting noise inside
Rather look in the mirror
Though that disguise
Look though the past to find your self
Look to the tress whispering in the wind
Look to all your thoughts that you hide within
And when you find
The one thought
That will forever and always
Make you fall apart
Rip it out and cast it aside
Across your heart
Across the sea
And it will be
That your blue eyes will never have to see
The fear that has turned your life inside out
Rather replace all the fear and all the doubt
With something new and something said
The rhyme and reason that resides inside your Head
You might also consider not capitalizing every line unless it begins a new sentence, or you wish to emphasize it.
As the ocean waxes and wanes
And as the sky turns dark again
And as the sun turns to moon
And as the stars cry out to you
^^^ Wonderful use of mixed allusions that build into a crescendo of super worldly action.
give you're self-up
To the shadows that hide in your eyes
^^^yes, from the eternal orbs to the internal orbs, subtle and effective
To the everlasting noise inside
Rather look in the mirror
Though that disguise
Look though the past to find your self
^^^ creative development of a philosophy
Look to the tress whispering in the wind
Look to all your thoughts that you hide within
^^^ focusing on the central creative force
And when you find
The one thought
That will forever and always
Make you fall apart
^^^ what we believe to be our strength is actually the error to which we cling
Rip it out and cast it aside
Across your heart
Across the sea
^^^ Jungian-Buddhist response to illusion
And it will be
That your blue eyes will never have to see
The fear that has turned your life inside out
Rather replace all the fear and all the doubt
With something new and something said
The rhyme and reason that resides inside your Head
^^^ Although departing from tradition, this resolution is more than thought provoking - it is challenging.