Final picture

by Poempete   Jul 26, 2011


I took a photo
Of you in the garden
Little did I know

That a few weeks later
You would be gone
And it would be the final one

So I look at it
from time to time
To check that youre still smiling

But are you really
Would you come back now
Do you regret your life

Would you change anything
Or do the same again
And still die at 29

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  • 13 years ago

    by Poempete

    Hi thanks for your comments. Wrote this really quickly and didn't spot the spelling mistake, thanks!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Poempete

    Hi thanks for your comments. Wrote this really quickly and didn't spot the spelling mistake, thanks!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    It's a interesting poem and I enjoyed the read. Funny the things we go through in relationships and I think secretly wish the other person would change.
    Good write.
    FyI edit the last stanza, a misspelling :-) no big deal but thought you would like to know it's easy to over look. Been guilty of it myself
    Connie

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