by RSJ
Allow me to say, that in this poem, the 1st thought that came to mind when i first read the title, was that it's over used, but you've blown my mind with the way you've described it here jane, such a creative poet |
by BlueJay
This is wonderful! It is beautiful, and memorable. You describe the truth. Your choice of words is fantastic. It has a flow that is extremely nice for the tone of the piece. 5/5 from me |
by Saerelune
'First stanza: |
by Saerelune
Congrats on the win! :) |
Wow... this poem is amazing! I loved every word... every description was amazingly written... I love the meaning behind it. A well-deserved win. Congratulations! |
by nouriguess
Janey! |
by Jordan
I like this. |
These expressions can only come from the soul of a poet even when there is nothing left but heartaches and sorrow. |
Very good I loved it :) |
by Kips2.0
Good picture painted. "A hopeless man is a lifeless man." |
by The Queen
It's refreshing to read poems with repetitions such as this because it's not in every poem that you get to read these days. Not only the repetitions were good additions to the poem but at the same time added a lot to the flow. |
by Ste
Ah but "Je ne regrette rien". Alexander the Great is reputed to have said "When a feared thing is inevitable it should no longer be feared". There should never be a hopelessness. I like very much your imagery. |