Comments : The end

  • 13 years ago

    by MyaEve

    I came across this poem,
    assuming it would be something different.
    When I read it, the words made an impact on me.
    The words, they flowed effortlessly.
    Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    5/5 because your poem is so closely related to what's going on in my life and you have captured it so perfectly. The only thing is to keep an eye on your grammar but either way the message is beautiful.