by jen sheridan Jul 28, 2011
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
If you seek the answer to the question, |
by Ste
I am not generally fond of rhyming poems as most seem too forced and constrained. This one, on the other hand, runs very well indeed, like a well-oiled train on seamless tracks. Not only does it read well but the words and thoughts are warm and wise too. |
by jen sheridan
THANK YOU. Your comments are appreciated and all advice taken into consideration |
by Tara Kay
This was really very good, the rhymes were well done, the flow was flawless and the wording was simple but worked so well. |