This was really very good, the rhymes were well done, the flow was flawless and the wording was simple but worked so well.
Thank you, this was good to read.

Keep writing,
Tara-Kay

THANK YOU. Your comments are appreciated and all advice taken into consideration
Jen

I am not generally fond of rhyming poems as most seem too forced and constrained. This one, on the other hand, runs very well indeed, like a well-oiled train on seamless tracks. Not only does it read well but the words and thoughts are warm and wise too.
This is a mature poem and I like it (despite my agnosticism).