Far-flung

Your poem is calm and beautiful... it reminds me of warm starry Autumn nights and dreams where I'm flying and weightless, put a smile on my face. :)

Decent, defently could be better if there was more to it...i felt like it was cut off.

Lovely poetry as usual, I've been stalking your profile waiting for a new poem, and I'm so glad you're posting ;)

I LOVE the use of "auspicious eyes', it gave a playful feel on my tongue (that sounded weird). It was interesting and a nice play on words.

Agree on the above comments. You seem to write on the same topic/emotion but still able to come out with a beautiful and impressive piece of art. I always admire your work for there is always something clearly magical with your style :)

"I love you like a star", dear, what a great opening line. Reading this poem is like watching a sad movie that leaves a strong impression and offers a cathartic release for this poet's diction always evokes an emotional response from their readers. True, this was certainly yet another romantic write that surely touched everyone's heart.

You certainly recycle a lot of your words/ideas throughout your whole oeuvre, such as connecting literary objects to living human beings, the stars, gravity ... But still you always manage to impress me and make every poem of yours thrilling. I like the way your poems are like snapshots, you don't need a whole page to say what you need to say, because your words explain themselves. They aren't designed to fit well, they just naturally combine into an emotional flurry. This was certainly yet another romantic write, loving your title as well. :)