A Piece of the Past.

That was a good piece i loved it that was a lot of feeling to express if its real

Thank you very much, Mostafa, I should change it. I appreciate the help, a lot!(:

This is a good piece of writing : )
you seem to be loaded with feelings to express, yet no one can easily find the right words to do so
am not an expert writer myself but I know that what weakens a poem is the ordinary choice of words, you should look for new vocab and never hesitate to use them

I think in the third stanza it's better to say :
"I'm still wondering,
why aren't here with me ?
I can't hear you,
Can't see"

and you should replace "your" by "you're" throughout the poem

keep on writing Myuh you got the talent : )