Feelings of Nature

by MyaEve   Jul 28, 2011


The rain hits the ground hard,
to show the clouds anger.

The leaves fall,
to show the trees sorrow.

The wind, it whispers it's secrets to the trees,
friendship everlasting.

The ground sprouts flowers,
to show its love.

Feelings of nature,
everywhere.

You just have to look(:

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  • 13 years ago

    by 123marilea

    I was born on the 28 of July and low and behold your POEM was the first one I read on this Poem's web page ! It's funny that this one stood out and then seeing when it was written made me smile! I so have a respect for Nature and a sincere Love for the outdoors! Nice poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by XXthe mistakeXX

    This was very pretty

  • 13 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This made me smile. :-) I really like your imagery. It's fabulous. Great work! And I loved how you included a smiley face at the end! ^.^

  • 13 years ago

    by Mostafa

    I liked the description of the elements of nature : )
    but I think in the third and forth stanzas you should replace "it's" by "its"
    well done
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by MyaEve

    Thank you, Queen Myryn. (That just fits, doesn't it?)

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