I like the concept of every action of nature being connected with human emotions. Your lines are short and strong, because that's how you're supposed to look at the things around you as well: just take one look and you'll immediately feel it. However, I still felt like you could add more to every image you've placed in every stanza. The clouds are angry, but how angry? Do they mock the air and overshadow the rooftops in their anger? Or are they just being chagrins? The trees are sad, but how sad? Do their boughs dangle to the ground, as if they don't want to face the sunlight? Or are they just sobbing for a little moment? There's so much more you can add to the natural objects, with this concept. :)

Luna- That's what I was thinking as I was rereading it. I was going to add a few more things, but then thought better of it.

I intentionally meant for the poem to be short, with a few stanza's. I didn't want to add anymore, therefore keeping it short. But I should have added more detail to it.

Thanks(:

I must say, this is quite an interesting, very unique and different much from the poems being submitted here about nature. Keep it up!

I must say, this is quite an interesting, very unique and different much from the poems being submitted here about nature. Keep it up!

Thank you, Queen Myryn. (That just fits, doesn't it?)

I liked the description of the elements of nature : )
but I think in the third and forth stanzas you should replace "it's" by "its"
well done
5/5

This made me smile. :-) I really like your imagery. It's fabulous. Great work! And I loved how you included a smiley face at the end! ^.^

This was very pretty

I was born on the 28 of July and low and behold your POEM was the first one I read on this Poem's web page ! It's funny that this one stood out and then seeing when it was written made me smile! I so have a respect for Nature and a sincere Love for the outdoors! Nice poem!