This is sweet, I really enjoyed it 5/5

"well escape the place of our past"
change well to "we'll"

"and find a place were we can laugh"
change were to "where"

"I'm not sure were we will go"
change were to "where"

Apart from those spelling errors, it flowed really well. The rhymes were well placed. I love the ending very much. Great poem! 5/5 :)

-X

Good poem i like the flow of this poem i can feel the pain and emotion 5/5