Comments : Awakening

  • 13 years ago

    by Jon914

    The sun warms the unscathed flesh on her back
    Stings the welts

    this part spoke to me the most. I understood it fully

  • 13 years ago

    by Kiko

    This is really dark and powerful, although I haven't been able to fully grasp its meaning. Part of it seems to be about a victimized girl or woman, who continues to remain in the abusive home. But it has darker elements to it, perhaps showing how the victim ends up victimizing others.

    Another fine write from you!!