Well, it is a distinct pleasure to see the original author grace our site with her often-usurped poem. Welcome aboard and I hope that this is the start of a long and rewarding membership.

Wow so intense so deep so amazing writing absolutely amazing <3

What a powerful message that I pray many of our troubled members and visitors across the board will read and understand.

Thank you for sharing this time of your life with us.

--Sher

I am nothing but amazed by the power of your words, that I am very happy that I have read!
So glad to have poets like you over here,, this will be my next weeks contest nomination since I am out of votes!

Amazing!

Aww wow... this poem mostly so sad but I loved the motivating and inspiring ending... it's so sad when someone tries to take their own life, but surviving something like that would really teach a person a lesson, that life is truly a treasure. I loved the progress made throughout the poem... Well done!

This was truly beautiful. It made me want to cry. Its just so deep. Once you start reading its impossible to stop. I loved it!

Each time I read a poem on this site I am amazed at the talent. But this was truly a gift from a true poet.
Connie

Your poem actually left me speechless. I think that the title fits perfectly as it does not tell too much and gets the reader curious. Furthermore I'm really captivated by your words, which are underlined by the perfect rhyme and flow. I did not think that this was too long or anything as I enjoyed reading each and every bit of it. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt and powerful write with us.

This kinda discribes my life, i can understand were your coming from

Inspiiring nd Beautiful. Makes me reconsider taking my life because of people that always leaves me. I'm alone in that cold house.

This is beautiful i hope ur feeling better n gettin the help u need ur poem is so strong :) well done i luv it

Good ending... nicely written

I honestly think that this is fabulous! I think you have expressed a strong emotion and made your thoughts quite distinctive and clear. The word choice really makes this poem pop, cause its nothing special really, but the way you use each word totally created something beautiful. There is a marvelous flow and an extremely strong ending, that I personally love! Great job!

Omg.. that was perfect *0*
Im inlove with this poem
Great job ^-^d